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    you said you liked me, and I liked you too.
    your afraid of comment, I am too.
    you obviously don't like me enough to talk
    to me in school, cause It feels like I'm the last
    thing on your mind. I think I'm just about done with
    you, because I'm tired of being stomped on, and
    being pushed around, I am worth something, so I don't
    deserve this. so now the time has come were you have to make choice, either be with me or with out me, this has been going on for way to long, and my heart can only take so much pain at the age of 16. I see you have made your choice, I hope it makes you happy, now it comes to that heartbreak time, were we finally say our last good bye's. I'm
    sorry, but I cant continue to be your friend, because you've put heart through so much pain already, and so I'm done.

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    photochick commented on Done

    07-15-2009

    great job full of your emotions and many have felt this way to one thing your first line you used the word comment instead of commitment second where you say " come were you have to make choice" change your were to where and add the word the in front of choice it will help with the emotions but you did a great job I am going to read more of your stuff in my free time you have a lot of raw talent that will grow into something amazing

    blue92

    08/02/2009

    Thank you.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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