Don't Be Like Me

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    • hannahxP
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    I found this little thing on the inside cover of a journal i keep, i don't remember writing it, but its almost like a little letter i wrote, only to forget it and find it again another time.

    Don't Be Like Me

     Don't be like me my friend, for it is a lonley existance.
    Don't be like me my enemy, I wouldn't wish that on the worst of you.
    Don't be like me stranger, Becasue you may never find your peace.
    I live every day trying my hardest not to be like me.
    Dont. Be. Like. Me. 

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    Phission commented on Don't Be Like Me

    09-04-2012

    "Don't be like me my enemy, I wouldn't wish that on the worst of you." I made a sound as i read this line. love it !!! actually, the entire point is well represented through your choice and masterful manipulation of words. good show ! (10) left me sad but inspired.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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