Don't Close Your Eyes

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    Don't Close Your Eyes
    Dont close your eyes
    The anger will explode
    Words will fly
    Ouch! That hurt
    They cut like a knife
    Those words you say
    Open up!
    I cant take this kind of bruising
    Dont close your eyes
    Stop this abusing
    All of those words you are misusing
    Whats really going on?
    You can tell me
    Open the door!
    Let the river flow
    Those words Im hearing, help the healing.


    Copyright ©2009 Heather Dawn Mibroda

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    origionalmerlin commented on Don't Close Your Eyes

    03-22-2009

    no words... just huggs)
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    orsonav commented on Don't Close Your Eyes

    03-21-2009

    Great flow! Easy to follow. Overall well written.
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    WordSlinger commented on Don't Close Your Eyes

    03-16-2009

    Flying Words, hmmm, that reminds me, :)
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    xxlheart commented on Don't Close Your Eyes

    03-16-2009

    a well expressed poem that seems to be penned directly from your heart. excellent write!! sincerely.me
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    dahlusion commented on Don't Close Your Eyes

    03-16-2009

    This is beautiful, honest, and caring. I love the expression of your open heart.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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