Don't get your pleasures because i'm scared

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    Don't get your pleasures because i'm scared

    Just because I'm scared
    doesnt mean you can take power over me
    don't laugh at me if i run away

    Just because i'm scared
    doesnt mean i can't do all the things you do
    doesn't mean your cooler than me
    don't mean that i'm weaker than you and you are stronger

    Just because i'm scared
    doesn't mean you can laugh at me
    doesn't mean you can call me names
    don't mean i can't be your friend

    Just because i'm scared
    doesn't mean that we are not equal
    it doesn't mean i'm scared of you
    doesn't mean you can take advantage of me

    Just because i'm scared- help me up and be a good person

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    gothpleasurepet commented on Don't get your pleasures because i'm scared

    09-14-2009

    excellent... it is nice to see some decent realism and self-awareness. Teenage years are so filled with drama and so much of what they write is self-pity, but your mature viewpoint says a lot... good work
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    casher6 commented on Don't get your pleasures because i'm scared

    08-23-2009

    Everyone is scared at sometime as long as you don't allow that fear to paralzye you then it is okay wonderful poem
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    Chaos128 commented on Don't get your pleasures because i'm scared

    07-28-2009

    Our fear is what keeps us alive. Not responding to your fear is foolishness. Responding only to your fear is cowardice. It's a fine line to walk. Great job, Kym!
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    Chaos128

    07/28/2009

    P.S. The "Bond girl" look works for you ha ha

    sawdust commented on Don't get your pleasures because i'm scared

    07-02-2009

    nice message if only people would be human instead of what ever else they think is kool very sound thoughts i like it
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    DiabloSniper commented on Don't get your pleasures because i'm scared

    06-16-2009

    I like the story that you told here. Its hard to pull off a repeative piece but you did a good job, maybe some tweaking with the order but still a solid piece. Enjoyed!
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