Don't Go Daddy

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    Don't Go Daddy

    Don't go Daddy,
    please don't go,
    whose going to read to me?
    Whose going to make the nightmares go away? You're my Daddy!
    You're my first love,
    so please Daddy don't go.
    My chest hurts and I don't know why,
    I feel as if you'll disappear and I'll never get to see you again.
    Don't go Daddy,
    please don't go,
    Don't leave me all alone where the darkness is eternal and nothing ever stays the same.

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    Bettysrainbow48 commented on Don't Go Daddy

    12-21-2009

    How bitter sweet and heart felt. Good write very touching.

    daniel081180 commented on Don't Go Daddy

    12-19-2009

    wipes away a tear. I so love this poem. Wish i was only able to be there for everyone who needs a dad. You know that is probably my one true desire is to be a parent and a good one. I am good for my boy but there are so many people who need good parents. thanks for the write this really hit a note for me. faves again...

    WindsOfMemory commented on Don't Go Daddy

    12-19-2009

    aww loves. i dont know what to say. my heart is heavy and there are tears flowing from my eyes. such a sad poem. our children will never have to go through that. i promise.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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