Don't Judge Me

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    Don't Judge Me

    Don't judge me with that demonic heart,

    that ocular view that makes worlds part.

    Don't bestow upon me that evil look,

    a stare, a glare, like blood on a hook.

    Dont burn me with that fire from hell,

    your words, they scorch me much to well.

    Don't pretend you know me, you twisted bitch,

    you horrible, wretched, and wicked witch.

    You cut me with those knives you make,

    though fiction they are, and much too fake.

    You small she-devil, you ode to death,

    I have someone to nurse me to health.

    I worry, not about your words oh no!

    but the pain your soul is in burning below.

    So don't judge me due to your anger and aggression,

    but by the warmth in my heart, a valuable lesson.

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    ansari commented on Don't Judge Me

    07-18-2010

    Yeah so blunt, but like words from a bullet, you've got style young man, a future ahead,all the best about your ambition. a 10 from me.

    Tempy commented on Don't Judge Me

    08-17-2009

    I worry, not about your words oh no! but the pain your soul is in burning below. hrmm cold words could put any flame out burnt distress in need or curing

    Gizina commented on Don't Judge Me

    05-10-2009

    Wow! Excellant

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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