Don't Leave

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A poem written before my divorce, but still longing and hoping in nature:)

Don't Leave

Blue eyes, I can see you are hurt with me,
Sorry the pain I caused you, I didn't see,
I told you many lies,
I see the mistrust in your eyes,
I used my words like a sword,
Words saids, that only are forgiven by the lord,
Please forgive me for what I have done,
Please, baby, don't run,
I know I love you,
My actions do not say I do,
However, I want to be a better wife,
Make you happier in life,
Remember our vow,
Look at our wedding rings now,
For my love, forever yours.

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BlackButterfly1 commented on Don't Leave

01-07-2011

There's nothing worse than feeling that it's too late.

Phission commented on Don't Leave

12-30-2010

regret, is one the best teachers but can be a beast as we are learning the lesson. well written poem, full of emotion and truth.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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