Don't Leave

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  • Confusion
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  • Loss

    Poem Commentary

    A poem written before my divorce, but still longing and hoping in nature:)

    Don't Leave

     Blue eyes, I can see you are hurt with me,
    Sorry the pain I caused you, I didn't see,
    I told you many lies,
    I see the mistrust in your eyes,
    I used my words like a sword,
    Words saids, that only are forgiven by the lord,
    Please forgive me for what I have done,
    Please, baby, don't run,
    I know I love you,
    My actions do not say I do,
    However, I want to be a better wife,
    Make you happier in life,
    Remember our vow,
    Look at our wedding rings now,
    For my love, forever yours.

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on Don't Leave

    01-07-2011

    There's nothing worse than feeling that it's too late.
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    Phission commented on Don't Leave

    12-30-2010

    regret, is one the best teachers but can be a beast as we are learning the lesson. well written poem, full of emotion and truth.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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