Don't Love Me

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  • AmandaT
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Don't Love Me

The wind blows into our presence.... while you grab my face
Your body breathes heavenly on my neck
Recognizing your heart that pumps so fast
I'm feeling weak from your embrace.

Don't stare into my eyes.... for I can't take the pressure
Disguise yourself from me
I don't want to know you
My body is weak
I fall to my knees
I feel brutal drunkenness from your potion.

I sit across from you.... all eyes are on me
They recognize us...they wish they were us
For the speechless conversation that is occurring
I'm feeling a bit of insecure loneliness.

Wash yourself off of  me...depart from me
Don't apply the time and effort
Become invisible, ignore the situation...you confuse me
I don't want to shake hands with the feeling of love.

I've covered you with a dark blue moon to hide your presence
I want you to dig your mind into a deep hole
I don't want to speak your language
I don't want you to be able to title me as a fool.

I've labeled myself being a woman
Too proud to have you call me your lady
So sad to have fear take over
Fear to understand the existence of your humanity.

Why am I here...to love you.... and protect you?
To explain the importance of needs?
My needs have come to a level that you couldn't even bear to know
Couldn't even take the time to comprehend the meaning of my seed.

You have a greater knowledge and a clearer image?
And yet you can't dive into my eyes, swim into my skull
Figure out what I'm thinking, explore the inner being?
Guess why you shouldn't even think to love.

I've come to the conclusion that I have to let you go
My bones are breaking with every unanswered question
My insides are aching with every breath
My soul has settled to abstract you…to regain self strength.

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prophesy commented on Don't Love Me

02-02-2010

you feel from the root, so then may your vines grow and reap the fruit that bares nutriants. /love your souls inspiration./ countiued blessings./love n lite the prophesy.

inkmaster commented on Don't Love Me

01-24-2010

Very profound...I really likes the last line .. "My soul has settled to abstract you...to regain self strenght"....Great write....Jeff

MarionYost commented on Don't Love Me

01-19-2010

AW! Now THIS is what I've been looking for! I LOVE THIS ONE. great job! love the awesomeness of your "Taking back what I should've never given you" attitude. awesome job with this.. We can all take something from this write. all the best -Marion-.. Might I suggest you read my " Good for you."?

scotslad60 commented on Don't Love Me

10-12-2009

Very strong, very powerful, very good! I liked this one very much.

bacar10 commented on Don't Love Me

09-23-2009

That piece made me weak. This poem grabbed my ear and got my full attention. Nice Job!

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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