Don't You Dare


  • wiskeygirl5090
  • I've been gone for quit some time but I'm back and ready to write more poetry.

Poem Commentary

This is just random thoughts.... I hope you all enjoy this

Don't You Dare

Don't you judge me,
  Don't you dare.
You don't even know me.

I could be just the girl
    Next door.
Maybe I'm lost
  And you can help me
Find my way.

Don't you judge me,
  Don't you dare.
You don't even know me.

You've never walked a mile
    In my shoes.
How can you sit there and say
   Lives so hard
When every night a child
  Goes to bed hungery.

Don't you judge me,
  Don't you dare.
You don't even know me.

It's hard to imagine,
  But every day
Another child gives up the ghost,
  And now their parents
Sit in an empty room where,
  They once slept,
So please don't tell me
  Lives so hard.

I just want to live in a world
  Where war is something
Our children read about in books.
     A world where....
No parents ever feels the pain
   Of buring a child
Before their time.
   A world where.....
The only tears that fall
  Are happy ones.............
Wouldn't that be nice
  A world of PEACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Don't you judge me,
  Don't you dare.
You don't even know me........

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Rhymer commented on Don't You Dare


Interesting read, what you are looking for in the poem is a utopia. Not to be found in this life. 10 from me................................

Donyon commented on Don't You Dare


I'm sorry, but what is the point of this. What is the message you want your reader to take away from this?

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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