Doomed For Life?

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    Doomed For Life?

    Hope? Where are you?
    Everything’s dim….life is getting grim
    I’m falling to earth’s crevices
    Getting dark….slowly to an abyss.

    Are you just using me?
    Am I just being tossed and played around
    I feel like being taken advantage of
    By people who mean a lot to me.

    I know I have been sinful
    Good things I feel unworthy…
    My only hope had left me
    Falling down fast into an abyss….

    True love and my hero I have found
    The one of eternal happiness is a possibility, I have met,
    But lo, he has hurt me and has thrown me aside
    It doesn’t mean he is the one I would be with the rest of my life.

    Life is so lonely and dismal
    I’m beginning to believe I deserve it
    To be doomed and to die in gloom
    I believe happiness is not mine to delight
    For all that’s happening to me - -
    I realize that this hurt I deserve to be
    Doomed for life of dearth……

    Phoenix 3.12.09 2.20pm

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    DavidRayy commented on Doomed For Life?

    08-07-2009

    Y.L.L.I.W.........................................

    ToddC commented on Doomed For Life?

    05-22-2009

    Very sad piece..But the writing is excellent...It is full of angst..and raw deep emotion...I love it !

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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