Downwards

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    Poem Commentary

    Downwards is a Acrostic poem. This type of writting is fun to do.

    Downwards

    Downwards I fall,
    Oh wind in my hair,
    Wishing Gods call,
    No time for despair,
    Wanting salvation,
    Angels all around,
    Ready for heaven,
    Death comes to town,
    So downwards I fall.

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    Tempestlady commented on Downwards

    06-12-2011

    What goes up must come down. Hopefully not too far down. Nice work and loved the rhyme. Write on handsome.............Tlady

    koolmom0 commented on Downwards

    05-22-2011

    Hey this is an awesome write, don't fall too far though LOL. :)

    Vincent

    05/23/2011

    TY smiles Vincent

    AlisRed commented on Downwards

    03-27-2011

    I absolutely adored your rhyme pattern! Also your opposite objectives were quite intriguing.

    Vincent

    03/28/2011

    Thank you for your comment.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    Vincent’s Poems (6)

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