I am here.

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Wrote this to my Girlfriend.

I am here.

I still wouldn't be able to show
the way you make me glow, and,
although you think you're a waste of time
I disagree,
From your presence in my mind
to the cute texting late at night
Girl, you are precious
no matter what's the matter.
Even if you don't tell me, it matters. And,
I'll be there when your heart shatters
to piece it back together, and,
comfort after such a disaster.

You say to me that you don't cry, but,
you and I both know that's a lie.
Knowing that I'm a lot like you,
then crying is a battle, that when alone, you lose.

I'll be here when you're sick of drowning in your tears, and,
sick of fear, and believing ever single lie that's between your ears,
my darling can't you hear?!
I care...
more than you could ever know,
not just because I've been there before, but,
because no one deserves that dark, deep, and empty hole.
You were made in the image of an artist,
an artist who put in you a part of himself,
My dear, He is near.
Again I will say, I am here.




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shakeme4life commented on I am here.

12-01-2010

captivating poem , sounds of a conversation , of a man who knows how to be a womans safety net ..

lonelyboy77

12/03/2010

Thank you sooo much! It actually was originally a text message, but it got too long so i turned it into a poem lol.

koolmom0 commented on I am here.

12-01-2010

This is so lovely and heart felt. Don't be afraid to show this to her. It's awesome. :) Koolmom0

lonelyboy77

12/02/2010

I gave it to her! She loved it! :) Thank you.

nam1292 commented on I am here.

12-01-2010

you got it right.....great write beautiful phrasing. keep it coming ~nam

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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