Dragon Stars

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This one is for my friends I miss you all.

Dragon Stars

Falling stars from the sky.
Only seen threw Dragon eyes.
There is a place in my mind.
caught forever lost in time.
Is it me that you see?
Drifting out to the sea.
A little pain.
Like a train.
Rushes threw me so deep.
No escape in my sleep.
I wake up late in the night.
With a feeling nothings right.
Am I still dreaming or awake?
This is more than I can Take.
To never wake up with a smile.
To always go the extra mile.
Is this fate?
An empty plate.
Always wanting something more.
closed always behind a door.
Locked inside a broken heart.
Every day I play my part.
On the wind I take flight.
charging in like a knight.
To save the day.
To catch the rays.
They call out to me.
Because I can see.
The light inside.
A lonly ride.
It seems as If it never ends.
No time to hang out with my friends.
All I do is hope and Dream.
I try so hard not to be mean.
Always looking for the good.
Lost again in the woods.
Threw the tall trees.
Flying high On the breaze.
Falling fast to the ground.
I wake up afaid to look around.
It was all a dream.
The distant screams.
Still I hear them very clear.
Almost as if they are in my ear.


By @{Dragon}

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Indigogreen16 commented on Dragon Stars

06-06-2009

Dragon, this is a nice poem. However, I think that you could improve the formatting for better delivery............................

DragonAngel

06/06/2009

formatting how? and how do i do it on here?

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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