DRAGONFLIES

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  • queenrosered
  • Waiting for escrow to close on our new house in Vegas...will still visit Mexico often! Sorry I've been away so long from this site! Great to be "home" :D

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In Cabo San Lucas, Mexico, we have a two-story home and a terrace up on the second floor which overlooks the pool. One night, while sitting and watching (and yes, smokin a blunt) I watched the dragonflies and this poem came to me. It was mystical, magical, fantastical! Hope you enjoy! Thanks! :)

DRAGONFLIES

From the terrace on my roof,
Gazing at the pool below,
 In wonder rapt, I watch,
 As the water gently flows.

 I stay hidden in the darkness,
 (Save the light from yon full moon)
 So amazed at nature's largess,
 Spying fairies as they spoon.

 Yes, I know that it sounds crazy,
 But I've seen these wondrous steeds;
 Dragonflies with winged ladies,
 Astride their backs, to waters lead.

 I watch in awe as they dismount
 And hold my breath, lest they should hear.
 Such beauty one cannot discount;
 While they bathe, their men appear.

 Dragonflies dipping and soaring,
 As naked fairies play and kiss.
 From above the rain starts pouring;
 All my life, I've dreamed of this.

 I hear the tinkle in their laughter,
 As two by two, they mount their steeds.
 I know I'll watch for them hereafter;
 If only in my sweetest dreams.

 So when you spy a dragonfly,
 Think well on what it may portend;
 In quiet night, by moons full light,
 Watch close as these steeds descend.

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bforibus commented on DRAGONFLIES

01-20-2010

this was too unique and fantastic to qualify a comment to post to it, but in the attempts to comment... i loved it

queenrosered

01/21/2010

Thanks so very much B4!! UR a gem! Peace, Love, Light, Rose! XD

Rodcen commented on DRAGONFLIES

01-20-2010

I love Dragonflies, they are so cool looking.... Very good poem, kudos and two thumbs up

queenrosered

01/21/2010

Thanks again Rod, lol! They are kind of magical, aren't they? Peace, Light, Love, Rose! XD

1990lh commented on DRAGONFLIES

10-11-2009

ahaha that was preetty cool i enjoyedthe read u painted a great picture in my head love great job

queenrosered

10/11/2009

Thanks so much 1990! Much appreciated! Love, Rose! :)

RettaJ commented on DRAGONFLIES

10-11-2009

wow this is so dream like...reminds me of tinkerbell and mermaids playing amongst each other.

queenrosered

10/11/2009

It actually felt like a dream too retta, maybe that explains the dreamy quality! Thanks so much! Love, Rose :)

fmrdancer commented on DRAGONFLIES

10-11-2009

A beautifully written fantasy. I love dragonflies. they are so ethereal and fairy like

queenrosered

10/11/2009

They are fantasy huh? Thanks for reminding me, lol! (wink) I sometimes straddle the two worlds, a great place to be! Thanks my friend! Rose! :)

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.