Dragons Eternity

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This is how I see the world

Dragons Eternity

Dragons Eternity

An open of a door in time.
Once again a dragon rhyme.
The days go by like I am asleep.
Here I stand on my owne feet.
Looking at the life I had known.
Now here I stand in the new unknown.
Lost for days here in my brain.
All my life right down the drain.
Wasted time is never found.
My world is crashing to the ground.
Burned so deep in my heart.
To always try to be so smart.
All my pain has made me strong.
Could it be maybe I was wrong?
I made my choice to be free.
On dragon wings I sail the sea.
I give to you something cool.
On the edge of your stool.
With all the words I could use here.
They cut right threw always clear.
So let us move threw the night.
A falling angel from the light.
Falling from so very high.
A shooting star catches my eyes.
Life will have its ups and downs
Sometimes a star sometimes the clown.
One thing keeps me looking up.
Some only see an empty cup.
I see you threw my dragon eyes tonight.
Some times we have to do what is right.
Off you go back to your life.
Here is your chance to join the fight.
A chance to stand up to the dark.
I take a long walk in the park.
Some where is a friend I caint see.
The one and the only Eternity.

By @{Dragon}

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brokenhearted11 commented on Dragons Eternity

01-12-2011

beautiful. my favorite lines:Now here I stand in the new unknown. Lost for days here in my brain. All my life right down the drain. Those might be my favorites because i relate so much to them, or maybe theyre just awesome. great job, i look forward to reading more of yours. keep writing!

DragonAngel

01/12/2011

Thank You so much

KLS commented on Dragons Eternity

03-04-2010

I'll be your friend bro! And I think the choices you make rock. Soar on and don't ever let them bring you down!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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