Draw Me

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Draw Me

My heart is not completely hardened
there is still softness hidden
sheltered by layers of pride
beneath ridges of fear
masked by resolve

My soul is not too far gone
there still remains a yearning
though it may be faint
tugging at my emotions
planting seeds unease

My mind is not closed off
it is filled with concern YOU will let me go
that I will no longer hear YOU
I am driven to find answers
to my many questions

My prayer is not made
looking for some quick fix
still trying to keep some small part of me back
or hiding my darkness

My cries are not sent up
desiring from YOU comfort
but rather YOU keep tugging
that it become more urgent
that YOU please not turn away

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ayinde12 commented on Draw Me

05-18-2009

DRAW ME. DRAW ME LIKE A LOVELY PIECE IN YOUR HEART OF BLISSFUL PEACE. I AM THE AFRICAN BAMBOOPEN, I STARTED WRITING AT THE AGE OF TEN. AND I HAVE ALWAYS HAD THE BELIEF THAT ONE DAY,MY TALENT SHALL GIVE MY TROUBLED MIND A RELIEF. DRAW MY PICTURE ON THY MIND, AS A CREATIVE AND GIFTED KIND. BE MY PAL,DEAR POETESS I SEEK AND TOGETHER LETS REACH THE PEAK. ....i love your poem.keep it up.lets be pals please.my email is dayogali@yahoo.com and my number is +2348036125208.we can exchan

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

ndg’s Poems (35)

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Words Not Needed 0
Contemplation 25
You Almost Had Me 6
She Still Does 4
Truth 8
Interferance 1
True Love 1
Goodbye 1
Addiction 1
Void 5
Untitled 2
Driving Force 3
Yahweh 7
Draw Me 3
Fortune 0
Wonders 0
Had I Known 2
Hollowed Out 0
Fear 1
Do You Ever? 2
Love Remember Me 8
Voracious 8
Banishment 4
You Said `94 4
Today`03 0
Prized Ehibit `07 1
Chimera -1
Untitled 1
Filmy `04 2
Release `05 2
For You 5
Perception 3
Happy Mother's Day 1
Siren 3
Cave Dweller 10