Dream Unto Eternity
Footsteps fall heavy as I approach the dais,
Sounding so solemn in the vastness of quiet
As I step under the cold light of redemption,
I find myself stripped of my every pretension.
And all that remains is the core of my soul
Released from the wretchedness, ragged but whole
I sleep now to await my dreaming in lieu
Of forsaking false visions seeming so true
Now, under the cold light that surely preserves me
I will keep dreaming until I find Eternity.
Phission commented on Dream Unto Eternity
05-06-2012
05/07/2012
Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.
Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.
| Title | Comments | Submitted |
|---|---|---|
| Title | Comments | Submitted |
| Hope Heart-Killer | 0 | 05/06/2012 |
| Dream Unto Eternity | 1 | 05/05/2012 |
| The Little Rat | 0 | 08/03/2011 |
| Bad Weather | 3 | 12/11/2010 |
| Go Die, Please | 2 | 12/11/2010 |
| By His Side | 2 | 11/17/2010 |
| Dreamer | 3 | 11/13/2010 |
| Farewell Letter | 1 | 11/11/2010 |
| Ascent | 1 | 11/08/2010 |
| Descent | 1 | 11/08/2010 |
| Life in the Gutter | 0 | 11/08/2010 |
| The Hunt | 1 | 11/08/2010 |
| Hunter | 0 | 11/08/2010 |
| Phantom | 1 | 11/08/2010 |
| A Reason | 2 | 10/18/2010 |
| AnnEx | 1 | 10/17/2010 |
| Summer Day | 3 | 10/14/2010 |
| Hell Ride | 3 | 09/19/2010 |
| K.I.A. | 2 | 09/19/2010 |
| Li La Loo | 1 | 09/19/2010 |
| In Time | 4 | 07/17/2010 |
| Faulted Heart | 3 | 07/15/2010 |
| Vengence | 3 | 09/29/2009 |
| Child of Mine | 3 | 09/02/2009 |
| Wishing Upon an Angel's Wing | 2 | 08/22/2009 |
| Transience | 2 | 08/22/2009 |
| Black Widow | 2 | 08/22/2009 |
| Night Stalker | 3 | 10/07/2009 |
| One Phrase | 2 | 04/29/2009 |
| I Can Cry Too | 2 | 04/29/2009 |
| Hearts of War | 2 | 04/29/2009 |
| Broken Bond | 3 | 09/29/2009 |
| Forgotten Land | 2 | 04/29/2009 |
Please login or register
You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
Login or Registerleave comments/feedback and rate this poem.