Dream

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Dream

Allow me to have a beautiful nights rest,
With no worries, no cares and no weight on my chest.
Lovely thoughts comforting my sleeping state,
Thoughts of you and I together my mind will create.
Wrap me tightly, all cozy, asleep in dreamland,
With the happiness you bring me,
you sweet loving man,
Stay close, let me feel you,
Let me see the real you.
Don't wake me! This dream is too real,
Emotionally it's everything I want to feel,
Baby, your name escapes my lips,
Only to be awakened by your sweet,
gentle kiss. 

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ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Dream

11-15-2010

I LOVE THIS ONE!!!! It is beautiful and descriptive filled with longing and appreciation. Nothing like having a dream be your reality. Beautifully done.......E

Sx9 commented on Dream

11-14-2010

so if I kiss you,your night will be all that,,but since it is a dream when you are awaken remember to this also can be real if you turn around,,nice lines,,

truth917 commented on Dream

11-09-2010

Great write.. The dream is shown in a hidden way that it's your reality. Nicely put

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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