Dreamality

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Just a thought-process on paper, dealing with belief and power within different realities.....

Dreamality

Seeking to rekindle the essence
To cultivate consciousness
Live in my lessons
A different human experience
To whisper resurrection
To perfect my divinity
Everytime I awaken
In dreamtime or reality
I'll give thanks for
The gift of life
Awake by day
Asleep at night
And why do I question
Which one of them's right?
When within one I have power
And infinite sight
Perfectly aware that
Dream is a movie
That I'm right in there living
Yet can see from afar
Knowing when I'm scared
That all is not real
Removed and observant
Yet still able to feel
Amazing that I can
Do these things in
One reality, yet not another
Yet I give more belief
To the world in which
I have less power
Which, in the Great Perspective,
Means I am giving it more
Its wonderful at this moment
Pop Pop Pop
Realizing that I have
Great lessons to learn
From my dreams

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DeepEclipse commented on Dreamality

07-15-2010

Diving deep into the conscious and sub-conscious. Seeing both planes from an outside point of view. Interesting subject. I like your style of deep complexities crafted through sharp wording. [That I'm right in there living Yet can see from afar] - this set up an interesting visual. Was like a first person self watching the third person self in motion. Two-in-one. Enjoyed this read. I especially liked how it freely drifted between the two, seeing both as an equal existence.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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