Dreamer

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Dreamer

All I ever wanted,
And all I'll ever be,
And all that ever was,
T'were nothing but a dream
And when the dream shatters,
And when the sleep-fog fades,
I find that all there is,
Reality unmade

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Rhymer commented on Dreamer

12-11-2010

Not to long and not to short, excellent write and read.'......................

smaffa

12/11/2010

Thank you for your opinion.

Franziska commented on Dreamer

11-14-2010

First of all, I disagree with Sx9's viewpoint. I interpret the poem as thus: dreams are just concepts and like wishes; they are intangible. They only become real when you realize them because the future is not set in stone. "And when the dream shatters...Reality unmade." I really like this poem; it is short, sweet, and to the point. The future is what you make it.

Sx9 commented on Dreamer

11-13-2010

WE ALL DO,AND WAKE UP TO FIND OUR ASS WET FROM OUR OWN MISFORTUNES AND SORROW,,BUT WITH HASTE WE COME TO REALIZE THAT LIFE IS MORE THAN JUST CLOSING OUR EYES AND PLAY DEAD,,

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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