dreaming of what i could be
dreaming of what others see
dreaming of my true identity
dreaming of what portrays me

wishing for the dream to come true
wishing to show it to you
wishing you could join me too
wishing i could know what to do

thinking of how i can achieve
thinking of what to believe
thinking of the love i can concieve
thinking of who i might leave

believing that it will be ok
believing that it will start today
believing you will show me the way
believing it will stay

of a dream
of what it seems
i'm doing it right
that i just might

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WhiteKnight commented on Dreamimg


well done. many of us feel like this holds true. it feels like our life is a dream and we wish either to wake up or for it to change. ryan

Penname commented on Dreamimg


I would make some minor changes like removing the word "of" where it detracts from the rhythm of the verse. But it's good over all.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

SunnyRain’s Poems (30)

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I'll Forever Miss You 0
On My Own 1
Shooting Star 1
so far apart 3
mine 2
the little things 1
There for you 1
waiting 1
change 1
unforgetable 1
now my life is through 2
if there isnt any rain 2
Again 1
The forgotten love 1
Just him 2
just one second 0
Dreamimg 2
man made 1
Yesterday 0
Forever 0
take a look at me now 2
the truth i cant deny 0
no more him 0
a place to go 0
out of my reach 0
love in any laguage 0
I'm Dying 0
Unspoken Love 1
Every Day 1
Believe 2