Dreamimg

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    Dreamimg
    dreaming
    dreaming of what i could be
    dreaming of what others see
    dreaming of my true identity
    dreaming of what portrays me

    wishing
    wishing for the dream to come true
    wishing to show it to you
    wishing you could join me too
    wishing i could know what to do

    thinking
    thinking of how i can achieve
    thinking of what to believe
    thinking of the love i can concieve
    thinking of who i might leave

    believing
    believing that it will be ok
    believing that it will start today
    believing you will show me the way
    believing it will stay

    dreaming
    of a dream
    wishing
    of what it seems
    thinking
    i'm doing it right
    believing
    that i just might
    dream

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    WhiteKnight commented on Dreamimg

    06-02-2009

    well done. many of us feel like this holds true. it feels like our life is a dream and we wish either to wake up or for it to change. ryan
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    Penname commented on Dreamimg

    05-25-2009

    I would make some minor changes like removing the word "of" where it detracts from the rhythm of the verse. But it's good over all.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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