DREAMING

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    short, sweet, but i like it

    DREAMING
    Fantasy, perfection, terror and scream
    Slumbering sleep, in eternal dream
    A fantasy world of wonders and awe
    Wonderful visions, only dream's law
    House, school, love, and strife
    Endless slumber, view perfect life
    Sleeping sweetly, wait for dreaming
    Perfect world, dream is beaming

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    rainyxsun commented on DREAMING

    07-15-2010

    I love sweet dreams. :] This poem is short but very amazingly done. x) Nicely flow. Made me smile. I love this poem. Good job !
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