Dreams Come True

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    WAAAAY out from the LP-ness. bad day ya know

    Dreams Come True

    "Dreams do come true" is what i think

    standing, smiling atop a burning heap

    of human fleah and buildings ruined

    this is what i've been waiting for

    oh yes look how the moon blocks the sun

    how like the day this life is done

    so beautiful the city burns

    yes, burn for me tonight

    You always said you wanted to be like a star

    so have fun again and crash into this earth

    destroy it! destroy me! destroy yourself

    shhh wasnt this your dream?
    wasnt this what you wanted?

    tell me, tell me if you can still speak

    have your dreams come true my love?
    did i give you your dream?

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    Ydorj commented on Dreams Come True

    09-01-2009

    Would make a nice short story too. Very illustrative. Thank You.
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