Dreams Unbidden

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his litterally came to me in a dream, I just wrote it as I saw it. It's rather depressing and yet hopeful at the same time and I have no idea how I managed that. Hope you all like it.

Jessica Gilbert

Dreams Unbidden

Once in Dreams
Twice in Fate
Thrice in Comfort
And four remains

Child's Dreaming
Love's Lament
Forces Willing
The approach Begins

Forever Waits
And will Return
Forces Draining
It's time to TURN

Timing is Forever
Nothing is Failing
Begins to Fight
THe Prophecy has begun

Fighting is Foreordained
Passing the Quest
Writing the Stories
You then pass the Test

Fountains are Bleeding
Quiet has Passed
Timing has passed us by
And forgotten what is here

For the One to forget
Is the One to remember
Needs to keep the Story
For the reason Forgotten

Whiteness blends into Gold
Hatred screams Defiant
Holding something close
And feeding right again

Seeing Fire begins to fail
Fighting holds the Grip
Anger looses control
Looses all for this

Facing the Tribune
Sealing the Fate
Seeing quiet and Silence
Finds Hope in the Lake









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Rhymer commented on Dreams Unbidden

10-23-2009

Nice write. I enjoyed the read from a very talented poet. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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