Dreams

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Dreams

In my dreams so vividly

I feel the fear of an unknown presence coming near

I try to run

something holding me

in a place of complacency

it whispers my name

in a echoing tone

come near, come near

repeat as it startles me to a numbness

help I scream

from this fear that’s invaded my dreams

leave I say

it whispers back no

I was commissioned here

to take you to a far away land

across the sky becomes dark and gloomy

as if the sun moon and stars

had been stripped from the sky

what a dream

I hope!!

R.L.R.

5/31/2010

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Qualin commented on Dreams

07-16-2010

HOW WELL I RELATE TO THIS WRITE...AND UNDERSTAND. I HOPE IT IS AS THE BIBLE STATES "OLD MEN DREAM DREAMS",I ENJOYED THE READ AND ESPECIALLY THE SUBJECT ...YOUR FRIEND QUALIN

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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