Drift Away

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    Drift Away

    The world spins by without a care.
    I do not even dare
    It passes me by
    And I just sigh
    As it slips away
    I'm Just wishing it would stay
    My feelings sway
    As it all drifts away
    It all drifts by
    As I gaze into the sky

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    paskey commented on Drift Away

    06-08-2009

    Do exactly what you do. Commit your feelings to pen and paper. Lyrics to a song never sung or a book never written. The pain you feel is a gift given to you to help others realize that many are out there. Listen to lyrics, read the writings of others. We are all in the same ship. The challange is to never ever jump overboard. Recognize your gift and run with that gift. Your inner peace is waiting to meet you. A stranger that you helped through your writings will introduce you. Every day is a new challange. One day at a time. It's called baby steps. We all take them and we all walk the path the same way. Knowing that many share the same pain is comforting. Use it constructively. Your gift is being so young and feel so much. Appreciate what you have. Would you rather be a cold fish. I think not.
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    IAMLIKEU commented on Drift Away

    05-25-2009

    Time is a precious commodity and many of us are poor beggars. I know I am. Thank you of reminding us of that in this short little tidbit.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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