Drifting

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Drifting

Drifting like the wind in and out

of time and space,

circling around till once again

I see your face.

 

Never obtaining what might

have been mine,

I sit here again in and out of time.

 

like ships that pass in the nights

of old,

I feel there is a story being told.

 

One that's deep and full of wonder,

dare the stars spill out their plunder.


Filling in where love went wrong

creating a bond

that's true and strong.

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randomthoughts commented on Drifting

06-23-2009

(: ..................................... :) SMILE (: .............................................. :)

WordSlinger commented on Drifting

06-23-2009

Every word of this is just ass kicking, The beginning is really good, This poem touches me alot, good poem there ;), my friend, poetrygal45

Artie commented on Drifting

06-23-2009

The rhythm of this, and the word usage, are perfect. This is a great poem. The whole piece has a soothing feel to it, like a beautiful song. I can hear the melody in my mind.

FLAWLES commented on Drifting

06-23-2009

Another nice piece of work. I like your rhythm with this. Seems like someone's out of sight; but not out of mind.

NekodaGirl commented on Drifting

06-23-2009

Wow I love your rhythm, the whole poem is so beautiful ^.^ the last three stanzas I really like, they just rang in my head after I read them.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

poetrygal45’s Poems (62)

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Apples 1
This is a love story 2
Gone I go now~ 1
Kisses~ 1
Beyond~ 0
Tears~ 2
Beyond what you see 0
Deeper waters 1
Rambles 0
The mountains are calling ~ 1
She sang~ 0
tic toc 0
Uncut chains 0
Love holds me.... 2
My Garden 1
kick 1
Repentance 0
emotional abuse 8
untitled 0
Journey 8
Yet 6
Another fight 9
Vanities Crime 9
Lost innocence 5
loves, holy, fire. 12
Baptism 19
The hands of faith 7
behind these tears 5
A bit of blarney 10
A daughters grief 6
echoes of goodbye 7
Heartaches cry 6
To love myself at last 8
Set free 3
Unfit love 5
A feather fell from heaven 4
Goodbye 105
on the wings of a dove 1
Drifting 5
The kiss 5
Flawless wings 4
night come softly 1
forest song 2
mystery's plan 6
Young lovers 10
Black Roses 9
Expectant heart 5
His Face 1
Her need. 2
Majesty in Flight. 7
On my knees 6
My gift 6
In moments like that. 2
Wilted flower 6
Two shades of gray. 2
In His foot steps. 3
Under his wings 3
One single rose.. 9
A symphony of praise 3
brooding eyes... 4
Little raggamuffin 13
broken bird 7