Dry Blood

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    Dry Blood

    For five long years, I've fought tooth and nail
    But every turn I took saw me fail
    Cut up and torn inside
    From slivers of my broken pride
    My past, added up, tells quite the twisted tale 
    It would probably make most stories pale
    Somehow I took it in stride
    Even tough I know a part of me died
    Every time...
    That I was forsaken
    Every time...
    That I was betrayed 
    Every time...
    I learned that I was mistaken
    I turned my back, spit blood and walked away
    No longer weak, no longer blind
    No longer sick, no longer tired
    I've found my peace, yeah, Im on a roll
    Lifestyle increase, I've purged my soul

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    redbloodink commented on Dry Blood

    12-28-2009

    Beautiful write Rainz.... A struggle with in.... God has a path for you..... He made the way... not always easy to find or follow but you can ... let Him lead you by the hand.... I see the talent..... don't ever think less of yourself or let others make you think that..... ty for sharing Rainz...... red

    Rainz

    01/07/2010

    Thank you Red, for your kind words

    MarionYost commented on Dry Blood

    11-30-2009

    HELL YEAH, I LOVE THIS ONE. Definitely classifies as a favorite... awesome write. thanks for suggesting it. :) all the best -Marion-

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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