Dying to Live Love

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There is a inner-drive in us all to experience a guine and unique love with another person (of the opposite gender; I mean). For those who have experienced that bond...then this poem is a congratulations. For those who have yet to enjoy this type of relationship I encourage you and hope that someday you will have the memories to last a life-time.

Dying to Live Love

If tomorrow's like yesterday - your's and mine,
  I'm certain the sun will shine;
though apart we may live,
  forever our love we give;
as our balloon nears the sky,
  never will we question, "how or why?"

In my dreams - you and I,
  a life of love will not die;
if I could trade every tomorrow, for just one yesterday,
  it would be the one of love, you and I play;
our love is forever, this is true,
  if you need, it's there for you.

Pictures I lack to remind me,
  but in my dreams it's you I see;
please remember us and never forget,
  never dispair or have any regret.

I leave you now, to this moment in time,
  in times of solitude, may you reflect on this rhyme?

Into tomorrow flies the virgin white dove,
  my only quest. . .. . .Dying to Live Love.
    ©2006 Randolph D. Brown Jr.

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Isaiahjanae commented on Dying to Live Love

02-28-2010

Such a poignant message in this awesome poem. You are an amazing AMAZING poet !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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