E-Motion

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The cosmoligical constant is Gods good energy !

E-Motion

Mix energy with motion
and watch the concoction

Energy + Motion
Could cause convulsions

Mix good with bad
And you might be sad

Gradualness with passion
is surely the session

Anger is a sign of danger
Where love is from above

Wasted energy is a
Drain on the battery

Distractions subtract
Where attractions add

Stay focused on one thing
And make sure its a good thing

Energy mixed with a bad thought 
is an emotion of doubt

Energy mixed with a good thought
Is an emotion of sprout

So don`t sprout the doubt !

Einstein was about E = MC  squared
but i say  E  +  M  =  are you having a good day?

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etheraledict commented on E-Motion

06-17-2009

wow Richi, like i said the other day this one got me off the couch feeling electrified now thanks just the spark i was looking for inspiration at its finest great job love it

Mangus commented on E-Motion

06-17-2009

Quite a different sort of piece. Light, but with a good amount depth. It seems to e some unspoken wisdom here. Nice write

Richisfun

06/17/2009

Its deeper than meets the eye, This is how it gets inside of you, read then dream about it.

PunkCutie commented on E-Motion

06-15-2009

lol i like that last line, very original by the way, it was enjoyable to read.i also liked the ryhming =]

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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