amor terrenal

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    amor terrenal

    soft whispers of earthliness
    dirt smeared across your cheek
    your love of the life
    a delicate dream on which the world rests

    sweet words of wisdom
    sun streaks in your hair
    your help a saving grace
    a desire has grown in my heart

    unlike anything I have ever known
    your peaceful delight is like a sunrise to my nightmares
    I dream of you as waking life

    sound notions rooted in love
    your jeans old and faded
    the world sings at your footfall
    and I am a flower that longs to be studied by you

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    gregster commented on amor terrenal

    11-25-2010

    truely an amor...very sweet and simple.i like it .nice
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    HarverTomsson commented on amor terrenal

    11-16-2010

    This poem takes me to a peaceful place where my heart is healed by hope. Harv
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    shywoodrose

    11/23/2010

    thanks for taking the time to read and comment, much appreciated! I will certainly return the favor when I have the chance! Shy

    shywoodrose commented on amor terrenal

    10-11-2010

    it's about someone i have admired from afar for so long and he is soon to return to my school, i am so thrilled, maybe ill finally have enough courage to talk to him?
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    jmylez commented on amor terrenal

    10-10-2010

    wow very very deep and your choice of words perfect,the metaphors really have me,,,,good job
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    lonewolf commented on amor terrenal

    10-10-2010

    very nice. love described like a peaceful flowing river. i like it
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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