ECHO

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    ECHO
    Light falls all around me, but in my world it's dark.
    Whispered words become echoing screams in the silence of my heart.
    I see the world not as it is, but how I wish it could be.
    All the lies and rumors stop, and everyone loves me.
    The mirror reflects someone I have never seen before.
    I see what is there and I wish for something more.
    Tell me lies and say I'm beautiful, maybe someday I'll believe.
    Trying so hard to believe what you say, but in my heart I feel deceived.
    Wishing for something I'll never have; in my world it does not exist.
    Longing for something I've never known, therefore it can't be missed.
    Writing words that mean so much but no one will ever read.
    Light falls all around me, but in the darkness, I'm left alone to bleed.

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    Oblaidon commented on ECHO

    12-28-2009

    I look at your picture and just don't get it. Very deep and nice write. Another 10 for me.
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    federallawman commented on ECHO

    04-24-2009

    This opens our eyes, How we feel some times. Very well written.
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    origionalmerlin commented on ECHO

    04-22-2009

    hmmm read through all of my postings so far (i updated my bio.. i wish to continue reading your postings,, let me know when you post more.. thanks. andrew
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    Paradice21 commented on ECHO

    01-01-2009

    THIS POEM IS JUST LOVEY. This Poem sounds like an echo of the heart! The Words flow and seem very meaningful! Nicely put!
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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