eclipse

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eclipse

Oh dear I saw the eclipse
when the sun and moon seemed touching their lips
and our green earth
becoming dark streaks.

some say the demon is gobbling the sun,
some say the sunami is waiting for its turn.
while others say it is a bad omen for everyone.
but I say the eclipse was a beautiful scene
which everyone has seen
and
I still believe the nature is showing its beauty on the earth, the sky and sea and it is there for ever to be
-yes the eclipse
this is what is running on everyone's lips and next time I will give you more tips for the
beautiful eclipse.

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xntric commented on eclipse

07-29-2009

Very beautiful. Perhaps the sun and moon wanted for just a moment in time to touch and be one, like forbidden love.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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