Ecstasy

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    • JamilahAyanna
    • It's been a 5 year dry spell, but I'm back 😘😘

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    Ecstasy

    I made it,
    To the place I finally wanted to be,
    Ecstasy,
    A love so high it surpasses the barriers of heaven,
    Search the inner chambers of my heart,
    Flow through the veins of my body and then,
    Use me,
    Use my eyes to see what true love really is,
    Use my hands to touch the sensitive part of love that is not willing to be touched,
    Ecstasy,
    A feeling so great it'll make you climb mountains and dive off cliffs,
    Leaving you with an overcame sense of completion,
    An addiction to the highs and lows of love,
    Constantly taking over my mind with thoughts of sinful pleasures,
    Take me,
    Take me to places I could never imagine being,
    To a place where only a love so strange and yet so great could ever exist,
    Show me yourself as bare as you can be,
    Strip yourself naked of all the worries in the world,
    There is nothing to fear for our love is all to powerful,
    In a world where life is defiled by the poisons of the earth,
    They all can see that we obtain true, and sacred ecstasy...

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    phatdaddee commented on Ecstasy

    05-03-2010

    You are talented indeed! Another keeper from Ms. Jam! This reminds me of my poem "Touch Me", you should read it when you have some time. Great poem!

    JamilahAyanna

    05/04/2010

    Thank u and I'll be sure 2 do dat....

    gregster commented on Ecstasy

    04-28-2010

    Love again eh.....cool......you talented .i like.keep it up

    JamilahAyanna

    04/28/2010

    I appreciate it thank u...

    JX commented on Ecstasy

    01-30-2010

    GREAT DELIVERY, WELL WRITTEN, OVERALL GOOD PIECE...I'M LOVIN' IT! LOL

    JamilahAyanna

    02/01/2010

    :) thank u very much 4 ur ever so kind words...

    HakiNatuwah1 commented on Ecstasy

    10-21-2009

    Dayum!!! You made me want to pop a X pill...lol...But I don't do drugs so I think that I will just read some more of your poetry and hope that I don't overdose...^_^... I wonder if you are just as addictive as this poem...mmm

    JamilahAyanna

    10/22/2009

    Lol wow thanx...

    PRober commented on Ecstasy

    10-14-2009

    a double entendre? more than one meaning? but a well written piece!

    JamilahAyanna

    10/14/2009

    Thank u 4 ur opinion I really appreciate it....

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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