Eden

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    Eden

    Life began in a garden,
    Or, so the story goes
    Then, we met a slithering snake,
    And, thus began our woes


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    bforibus commented on Eden

    10-27-2009

    for as long as it took me to get to this poem. i do wish it was longer. it had a humorous undertone to it, for a serious situation that may or may not be true. excellent job on this. it had to take a discpline to stop at four lines.

    Mandi

    11/02/2009

    thank you for taking your time too read my poems

    deni2u commented on Eden

    10-11-2009

    I like this one factual ,direct, finalized. I will read more Thank you

    Mandi

    11/02/2009

    thank youfor taking the time to read my poems

    queenrosered commented on Eden

    10-10-2009

    WOW Mandi! LOL! Short, sweet and right to the point, huh? I loved the rhyme and the subject. The last line was the most brilliant! "And thus began our woes", indeed! Thanks so much! Love, Rose! (queenrosered) :)

    Mandi

    11/02/2009

    thank you for taking the time to read my poetry

    HarverTomsson commented on Eden

    08-31-2009

    I'm looking for the Burma Shave sign next.........

    Mandi

    08/31/2009

    If you are really looking then read BEN

    Mandi

    01/04/2010

    changed my limmerick title to Limmerick for a Cop

    Mangus commented on Eden

    07-27-2009

    Short, sweet and to the point. Sometimes things are just that simple great write

    Mandi

    01/04/2010

    thanks for understanding that this was all that needed to be said'

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