EGYPT

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    EGYPT

    Egypt, that's where I want to go one day
    On a long adventure
    Seeing the pyramids up close
    Seeing how big they are, bigger than thousand of me
    going inside and touching them with my hands
    Recording them on video and taking pictures of paintings
    on the walls
    Seeing the tombs of the kings and queens and watching
    out for booby traps
    cool,ooooh exciting
    walking the desert without getting bitten by scorpions
    I'll make sure I have an expert with me who knows all
    about the safe places
    then I'll climb the tallest pyramid and look out at the sunset
    Screaming, shouting that I'm on top of the world,yea,
    I made my dream come ture
    I want to see all these places
    what do they say?
    Live this life like it's the last one
    I want to go to Egypt!

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    SpawnofSatan commented on EGYPT

    10-05-2010

    I love this. I spent a few months in Egypt myself. It's one of my favorite places in the world. -Spawn-

    kmeadows commented on EGYPT

    06-22-2009

    very nice, makes me want to go there myself. a few spelling errors, no biggie. very discriptive, good job.

    hissa17 commented on EGYPT

    05-16-2009

    Egypt welcomes you anytime you wish, i'm Egyptian living in egypt right now, if you want an experit i think i'll be not bad. thanks, see you.

    Athena1989

    05/30/2009

    ok

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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