Elderly Love

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    i wrote this based on a pic for my ELA class :)

    Elderly Love

    White hair,

    Smile lines,

    Red and white rose bouquet,

    Gray, red, black, and white,

    Silver balloon,

    Beautiful blue hummingbird,

    Physicality.

    Love floating,

    Happiness all around,

    Happy anniversary,

    Happy Valentine’s Day,

    Love is all around,

    Figuratively.

    Older,

    Newer,

    In between.

    Homey,

    Lovely,

    Comforting.

    They are happy,

    Where they are.

    Whether in an R/V,

    Or a mobile home,

    They’re happy as they are.

    It’s spring time,

    It’s nice outside.

    You can feel the

    Sun through the

    Blinds, The flowers

    Blooming with the

    Couple’s love.

    The crisp air,

    The rosy smell.

    Birds are chirping,

    Soft pedals,

    Taste the spring.

    Smiling,

    Pictures being taken,

    Sweet conversation.

    True,

    Genuine,

    Love,

    Affection.

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    Doo77 commented on Elderly Love

    04-24-2012

    Nice I like it its like u put yourself in their place

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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