elements

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    elements

    "elements"

    i want to live free,
    like a wind i come as i flee.
    like water replenished thirst,
    when trapped making it's way like a bubble burst.
    like earth, habitat of unusual species,
    so deep you can't understand the lest.
    like fire giving birth to the furnaces,
    to warmth hearts coldness and caresses.
    like love a wondrous sensibility,
    powerful force among elements reality.

    arpee'06

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    Bluestarboi commented on elements

    05-19-2009

    I enjoyed this very much, i love nature writings, i do ALOT of nature writings, i feel as though i can relate to nature in alot of ways. I like how you explained yourself with nature and how ur words just flowed very well written.

    arpee

    07/15/2009

    tyvm..

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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