Elusive Memories

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    Our dreams that go no where, the falls that never really happen, wakes you before you fall.

    Elusive Memories

    Caught between the image of the imagination
    The dreams baring no whitness at all
    No image there of
    Holding only the forgotten dream
    Seen only in your dreams
    Where wanted acts things that become reality
    Only in your dreams faulter and fall
    The dive that doesnot become
    Closeness awakes to change
    Beauty beholds the beholder
    She flys on the flying trapeze
    Hangs from her exsistance
    A feeling of flight but falls no where
    A towering building waits for the faller
    Awakes before the end
    The pacing heart jumps with emotion
    Returns like the thumping horse races
    Across with an endless thunder
    Frightens the soul
    At the end realizes it is just a dream

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    SavVySam commented on Elusive Memories

    01-30-2010

    Those dreams are the ones that get me up at 3am! lol So true and interesting that we've all had them at different times...Thanks goodness we do wake up!

    MrGee commented on Elusive Memories

    01-20-2010

    Very thoughtful poem. I like the use of simile in this work.comparing a trapeze artist with life. And, this poem is somewhat like a poem i have written entitled Forlorn. I shall post the poem Forlorn so that u may read and comment. your poem i rate a 10 keep up the good work

    sherry122 commented on Elusive Memories

    01-20-2010

    âBeauty beholds the beholderâ is my favourite line, dreams are yours and only yours to enjoy or to get frightened off, very well done!

    Bettysrainbow48

    01/20/2010

    Thank you sherry

    kage commented on Elusive Memories

    01-19-2010

    tells a great story and comes from the heart i think seems to me you speek to the mass with this one

    Bettysrainbow48

    01/19/2010

    It is just a dream not even mine but people do have dreams of falling in their sleep, just don't land.Thank you.

    WordSlinger commented on Elusive Memories

    01-18-2010

    Dreams from sleeping, and dreams in reality, is a great part of life, and if one doesn't follow their dreams, is misfortune, ty WS

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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