Elusive

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    Elusive


    You.

    You the crafter.

    You the writer of words.

    You kill with one verb.

    You seduce with another.

    You know, yet not.

    I am the prisoner unseen, unknown.

    I am the lover.

    You don't know.

    You have entranced me.

    You with your words.

    You with a pen.

    You with a paper.

    You with the thought.

    Me it reaches from miles away.

    Me it seduces.

    I the elusive.

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    pantleg commented on Elusive

    02-13-2009

    I liked it simple but revealingly elusive

    cottonluv commented on Elusive

    02-13-2009

    nice vixy.i like.good work

    NacolleMarie commented on Elusive

    02-13-2009

    awesome i love this

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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