Elysia

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    • LeeLee420xx
    • I am strong Because I have been Weak I Am Beautiful Because I Know My Flaws,I Am Afraid because I have Been Fearless, I Can be a Fool because I Know The Meaning Of Being Wise. I am me and I am awsome!

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    I wanted to share this poem. I didn't write it. But my husband did for me. And I really love and wanted to share it.

    Elysia

    On wings of love I send you
    The beating of my heart
    Wishes, dreams and memories
    But, Love, they're just the start
    Of what I want forever
    Your passion, love and smiles
    The lasting kind, the deepest kind
    Hand in hand for miles

    An empty page to write
    An endless book to fill
    You know that I will love you
    I will love you 'til
    The moon has kissed the ocean
    The stars have all blinked out
    The sun has dimmed forever
    I know this without doubt

     
                              Love
                             Aaron

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    kdarcy commented on Elysia

    08-07-2010

    Nice write, short and to the deepest points of how love feels, or as it should be. Be well, keep writing- read to also develop your talent, stop by if you find moment- not just my works but also the others here at OP, alot of talent here
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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