Embraced

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Embraced





In a moment of heat
salty taste of sweat
a moment of release
pale skin soaking wet

the pool so enticing
waters cold and deep
those eyes, glowing, slicing
Embraced, finished me



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Embraced commented on Embraced

05-26-2011

I still love this one, and always will!!!!! You have a way with words.....

danmartyjake1 commented on Embraced

11-11-2010

With few words, capturing so much emotion. My favorite type of poetry.

Rhymer commented on Embraced

09-30-2010

So much packed into two stanza's of poetry. Vivid and enjoyable read my friend.

ginga commented on Embraced

09-20-2010

Artie, Each word is so vivid, so alive and so vexing!! ginga

Artie

09/26/2010

Glad you enjoyed this

Teardrops commented on Embraced

09-14-2010

when it right it so right reminds me of the moon light a beach and two walking hlding hands for a start lol . Love this Marie

Artie

09/26/2010

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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