Emotional Rain

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    Emotional Rain

    Amongst the grey sky, billowing grey clouds loom.
    Floral scents dance through the breeze like a sweet perfume.
    Thunder rolls a head, echoing through the night.
    Lighting striking above, glowing in plain sight.
    Walking alone through the deserted streets.
    Small cool raindrops upon her skin, water splashing beneath her feet.
    Her eyes close gently as she stands within the storm.

    Her arms stretching out , as if she were to fly.
    Spinning in circles slowly, her face towards the sky.
    Rain masks her falling tears.

    Tears of mixed emotion.
    Her sorrow and pain flees
    Happiness comes with the rustling leaves of the trees.
    And she remembers.

    What she had left behind.
    What she came to this new place to find.
    A life that she could have only dreamed of before.
    This new world open and ready for her to explore.

    No longer feeling alone.
    And she is ready to search the unknown.
    Knowing she soon will find her dream.
    Hopeless to some it may seem.

    She will never stop, she will never give in.
    While she looks for her dreams and new life to begin.
    Emotions change within the rain.
    Knowing this feeling shall always remain.


    By
    Nacolle M.

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    Solaris commented on Emotional Rain

    06-17-2010

    I love it the use of nature to accentuate the emotions its masterfull my fave

    wamomo commented on Emotional Rain

    12-19-2009

    wow...this is beautiful....love it!...I have always loved storms and related deeply to rains fall emotionally...thank you for the wonderful write!

    redbloodink commented on Emotional Rain

    12-19-2009

    this is a great write.... took me on a journey.... thanx for shareing.... Red

    MarionYost commented on Emotional Rain

    12-19-2009

    Love this.. I have a strong feeling I'm gonna like your poems.. Nice :) All the best -Marion-

    BrielleC commented on Emotional Rain

    03-12-2009

    Love this one nacizzle! is it new? reminds me of one I wrote, called "Now the Rain is Falling." I'll post it so you can read and rate too! xoxo Girly... oh and you are so stunning looking!

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