emotions

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    this is a poem for jessica the love of my life who i have lost contact with.  hope you find this and read.

    emotions

    I have all these emotions in my heart,
    Ready to blosom, ready to start.
    Are you the one i would give my heart to?
    Are you the one who would take away these feelings of blue?

    If you are the one for me,
    I would give you my heart, without reprieve.
    I would make you happy the rest of your life,
    Moke your hopes and dreams come true, no matter the price.

    Are you the one who would love me for me,
    Give you my dreams, let me be free.
    I would give you all that you desire,
    Fan the flames of loves fire.

    Are you the one who will give me hope?
    Hold my hand, throw me a rope.
    In this life of fast lived lives,
    Slow down, hold my hand, side by side.

    Are these emotions well spent on you?
    will you take away the gray skies, make them all blue?
    I really do hope your the one.
    I'll give you my heart, bright as the sun.

    These emotions are all for you to see,
    i will give them to you, they are free.
    If you want this life with me,
    Then let you heart soar, given for eternity.

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    duestylee57 commented on emotions

    08-16-2009

    this is a very good poem it shows kindness and a heart that is ready to bloom

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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