emptiness

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    emptiness

    crying makes me go insane
    otherwise i be crying in vain
    now and always
    in blood red tears
    just to release my pain and fears
    but even if i were to cry
    i would do it until i die
    and then my life wouldnt matter
    though right now my life is shattered
    i try so hard to be the right thing
    but always fail to be what i should be
    wish my life could be glued back together
    but time machines dont exist and the only way to fix this mess of a life
    is to go back to take away some of the strife
    sometimes i want to die because i cant cry
    the only thing i know to do is keep inside the things i go through
    never have i felt pure bliss
    it is a beautiful wish
    i know i can be happy at times
    but thoughs times are gone with a love i had
    now all thats left is emptiness

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    kingone43 commented on emptiness

    07-24-2009

    Nice Work. Kind Of Sad Though. Keep Working At It, Life Get Better, And You Never Know What The Next Day Will Bring.

    lonewolf commented on emptiness

    04-30-2009

    keep your chin up and keep looking, you will find it

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    ADawn’s Poems (13)

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    a heartless dease 1
    lost 1
    love is not easy 2
    Til My Death 2
    emptiness 2
    memories 1
    runaway 1
    agian a mother gone was she ever really one 1
    mind your own business 0
    a life after death 2
    you lied 2
    i feel so naked 1
    about love 1