Empty Eyes

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    Empty Eyes

    Empty slides
    Rusty swings
    No players on the ground
    Afraid to live
    Afraid to die
    In this sandbox
    No one lies
    Not a dog
    Not a cat
    Not a fly
    Not a rat
    This is just one empty life

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    Drivingczar commented on Empty Eyes

    03-18-2009

    Real verses! Write more!

    Someone

    09/22/2009

    thank you!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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