EMPTY PRETENSES

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    EMPTY PRETENSES

    I pretended not to notice when you pushed my hand away.
    I pretended not to hear you when you said you couldn't stay.
    But I can't pretend I don't see you as you pack your bags and leave.
    As I watch your taillights fade, I can't pretend I don't believe.
    I can pretend that someday you'll come back to me,
    But I can't hide the tears you pretend not to see.
    Even as my hopes fade, I continue to pretend.
    But I can't fool myself that this is not the end.

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    brandon commented on EMPTY PRETENSES

    03-22-2009

    i felt this same way a few years ago

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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