Empty Soul

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  • Loneliness/ Pain

    Empty Soul

     I scour this desolate land
    In continuous search
    For who I am

    Ice clings to my beard
    Like fossilized stalactites
    From millenniums past

    The fires of hell can not warm
    One inch of this wretched soul
    For no flame can penetrate
    This broken carcass
    That was once human

    The howl of the north wind
    Will be my lovers song
    And loneliness will be
    My constant companion

    The fruits of life
    I will taste no longer
    For the bitter taste
    Has made me ill

    Forever I am destined
    To walk the ages of time
    Eternally damned
    By the sins of my past

    Until the master of death
    Claims his right

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    FranzJ commented on Empty Soul

    05-21-2010

    I find that writing helps me - a tormrnted soul is fuel for writing - keep it up
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    MsDana commented on Empty Soul

    04-20-2010

    This one tore my heart. A life with no hope of redemption..unbearable.
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    lonewolf

    04/20/2010

    this was a very lonely, very dark period of my life. i have since, slowly climbed back into living, and continue to strive to improve my life. thanks for reading, your comments are appreciated.

    Terrible commented on Empty Soul

    02-20-2010

    Remember that God is always there but I have been in that same boat lost darkened and full of shame
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    tierra7 commented on Empty Soul

    02-14-2010

    WOW ! Lonewolf, this is a very thought provokin' piece...very intense...you've captured our attention with this excellent masterpiece you have created ..i truly enjoyed hope to read more..HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY ! Blessings ! Namaste...Tierra @}-'-,- well worth a 10 + BTW: i love your poet name (the wolf is my spirit guide)
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    lostsoul17 commented on Empty Soul

    11-29-2009

    beautiful darling and yet you are not alone for i am with you in the darkest places!
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