Empty Vessel

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Empty Vessel

Empty Vessel

Walking in the valley of death in concert at the playground of sin
Dead in my sins with no gain shattering for another chance, in keen
Damaged character, broken heart, chaotic emotions, none in all just plain weak
In a jail with the worm on my shoulder hissing of sinfulness sins, dark-hearted freak
Mental lust of destruction; loss of all morals and wicked in heart, subliminally reek
Assailed by the bloody beak; my soul, the immoral boutique, my body, the dancing tweak
At the mountain peak I cry for help, yelling for I'm tangled with this sexual mystique
Please don't critique, don't you see my tears of blood, have pity for I lost my physique
My life is oblique to that last fight, in fright of your rejection, wondering, doubting, and timid
So please for this time again I come to your altar, have mercy on this child for I am enthusiastic
My HEAVENLY FATHER, my GOD, my guide the one and only YHWH YAH, do than hear this cry
I am at your clinic seeking redemption, to be cleaned, purified and made meek
Your gift of the tongues, a must, the key, the antique technique
My sword, the weapon that defeats the devil and makes him leak
Forgive me Father for my wrongs, my thoughts of fornication, the abominations and the fatal blasphemes
I surrender my all, soul and body and whichever that is left, see me not as Cain, but unique
Give me life and love; don't let this temple be of dust and dirty, have not my life be a spiritual comic Lead me with strength in truth and harmony and have me be your very best soldier, the fisher of men
Be my beginning and not my end, be my very best of friend
I'm a sinner by birth, without you I am nothing, just a creation, please do understand where I stand
I am sinking for I saw the storm, I failed you from birth, pick me up before I backslide, give me your hand
Let us make amends, I am dead man walking! Open my eyes and release my chains
I attend to your commend and I do apologize on my laziness at your expense, I did offend!
To the end of times until death I will be in adventure, a stranger to your gift
For I am that empty vessel in tenderness, in a sigh I praise and worship, don't forget me and do to uplift
Thank you for all, it is true that you are the healer, my Savior, YEHOSHAUH YHWH my cliff
With all I have to give I beg for your mercy to remove this graveyard shift!

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shakeme4life commented on Empty Vessel

06-16-2011

I love the message conveyed in regards to the struggles of living in sin .. how it over whelms different aspect

gregster

06/17/2011

cool

NBParis commented on Empty Vessel

06-14-2011

A nice deep read one takes alot away when we finish.

gregster

06/15/2011

IF U SAY SO

gregster

12/13/2011

now that i have grown in the knowledge of GOD .......THE NAME IS YEHOSHUA HAMASHIACH .IM NOW USING OLD TESTAMENT AND REAL NAME OF GOD WHICH IS YAHWEH OR YEHOSHUA.......letter j is invented in 1600s so the name jesus we use is well not correct at all.......according to the random house 1978 dictionary that name(jesus) means devil or horse lol

1990lh commented on Empty Vessel

06-14-2011

oh excellent, very powerful and touching. i love your poems they are very inspirational. yes, it is like a prayer.awesome job

gregster

06/15/2011

COOL

CatsMeow commented on Empty Vessel

06-13-2011

HI Gangster, A very meaningful poem. Maybe you could rearrange it to have better defined verses? It seems a bit crowded, with thought flying and rushing about. It was hard to follow. Sometimes it felt almost like a prayer?

gregster

06/14/2011

IT IS A LIKE A PRAYER......MY PRAYER IN POETRY.

gregster

12/13/2011

now that i have grown in the knowledge of GOD .......THE NAME IS YEHOSHUA HAMASHIACH .IM NOW USING OLD TESTAMENT AND REAL NAME OF GOD WHICH IS YAHWEH OR YEHOSHUA.......letter j is invented in 1600s so the name jesus we use is well not correct at all.......according to the random house 1978 dictionary that name(jesus) means devil or horse lol

cutbanksam commented on Empty Vessel

06-08-2011

I love it. This poem applies to everyone. The truth of it is beyond question. I could have written this. As I read I thought it was written for me, almost specifically. Wonderful work of art. Thank you and God bless you my friend. Yeshua has it all under control.

gregster

06/14/2011

good to know .GOD BLESS IN JESUS CHRIST NAME

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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