Empty

2 Comments

Poem Commentary

Please tell me what you think.

Empty

I watch the sky,
I wait for you.
You told me you'd come,
I hope it's true.

You didn't come,
I should have known.
Remembered your past,
And what it's shown.

I'm empty inside,
Feel all alone.
I cannot scream,
Or even moan.

My feelings gone,
So is my heart.
I wish I could leave,
Or to depart.

Another place,
Another home.
Another Love,
To call my own.

Why do we love,
Why do we hate?
Can't we be empty,
And choose our fate.

I loved you lots,
But now your gone.
I feel like a chess piece,
Mostly the pawn.

I can't get over,
the way you lied.
The way you laughed,
Or the way you died.

I hope your happy,
Wherever you are.
Cause I am empty,
A forgotten star.

Poem Comments

(2)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

LadyL714 commented on Empty

04-04-2010

A beautiful poem about loss and sadness that can cause those who have similar experiences to feel empty. What we must remember is God has a way of filling that void or emptiness. Thanks for sharing this.

Worthless commented on Empty

04-04-2010

God has a home for us all and all we really need is his love we just gotta learn to trust... alone on earth but is Neaven is own home and love and trust is what it's worth...

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

Emilia’s Poems (17)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Unreal 0
Mask 0
Found. 2
Fit In 1
Imaginary 0
Destiny 1
Empty 2
Mental Warning 0
Life 0
Distance 1
Keep going 2
God's Tears? 1
Heart 3
Insane? 7
A Game? 9
Dead.... 5
Death or Freedom? 4